Hikari 20

My Site and Drunk Duck

This fight scene was fun to write, but also somewhat complex. If you can get where this is going, let me know – I fear that it may be too obvious. There’s a strategy and a method to Selphi’s tactics here, and she’s certainly getting the job done.

Sequences like this I fear may work better when read right away, instead of a week apart. Because it’s going to be 3+ pages of an action sequence that leads into the conclusion (of the sequence, not this story arc). I think it reads better when you can turn a page, myself.

Anyway, be sure to come back next week to see if Selphi is able to come out on top…and what Portis may be able to tell the sisters about the bombing.